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In the sky, the red tones are calling
There is little time to catch the last few
Running through the woods, I feel exhilarated
My heart pounds for love, breath

Reaching the top, I feel disappointed
Nothing spectacular in the cloudlessness tonight
The atmosphere is missing something
-- or someone

Feeling lonely, I find companionship
We have passed each other often in seasons past
I find comfort in his broken but strong limb
We sit together and watch the red orb dip

While gazing at the horizon, my eye catches
A twinkle and a sliver in the sky
They appear to shimmer at me
As black fingers scrape across the deepening blue

The darkening dunes give me a yearning
Blowing breezes through my hair
Caressing my neck like a lover past
I begin to feel incomplete, and alone

Unfulfilled, I must leave for the time being
I know where my love lies, if I could but reach him
Like the twinkling lights above, he is far away
I thank my friends for their nature, sentiment
They know they will see me again
©2004-2009 ~KillerLimaBeans
:iconkillerlimabeans:

Author's Comments

This picture I took the other night at the beach. It's nothing spectacular, but I felt like writing a poem to go along with it. It's dedicated to anyone who ever has felt a loss in love.

c&c always appreciated :)

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:iconedited:
great poem and great pic to go with it, very meaningful :D

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The Good Ship Albion Will Set Sail December 32nd
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I love this. it gives me such a feeling of isolation though. The imagery you have created here is magical. beautifully written.

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"For I reached the heavens and kissed an angel. This angel now walks beside me wingless and mortal. For he is my gift from the heavens."
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I love the picture and poetry! This should be published!

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Left DA...
:iconkillerlimabeans:
Thank you, I'm glad you like it :D
:iconkillerlimabeans:
Thank you for the compliments, glad you like it :D
:iconkillerlimabeans:
ooo, you really think so? I'm glad you like it :D
:iconcrematu:
you know I love it

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Why do you wear that stupid man suit?

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:iconalypj:
very nice poem...i love how you incorporated the photo into it...they're both beautiful:) :+fav:

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the runway lights are the deepest blue
like the colors of your eyes
so close them tight and kiss me one last time

<3

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